Conclusion of First Draft (Week 10)

CONCLUSION

5. Conclusion, which provides a strong conclusion, amplifying the force of the argument,  and showing the readers that this solution is the best at meeting the circumstances.

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   1. Reference your narration and issues. Remind your readers why your issue is interesting or important
       and try to show why your thesis is the best solution or idea.
   2. Suggest your argument’s larger significance or long-range impact.
   3. Give the readers a psychological sense of closure.



 As the utilization rate of SNS is dramatically increasing, it is important to gravely consider the function of it. Also, it is critical to consider how to utilize SNS in an effective way and using it in diplomacy is one of the examples of this. I think SNS is an effective tool for diplomacy of Korea.

 If people acknowledge my argument, we can improve our diplomacy with SNS more effectively than before. It is not a good choice to get rid of SNS from diplomacy. Potentiality of diplomacy when using SNS, is large. If people effectively reflect strong points of SNS and solve the wrong point of SNS, we can enhance our national image and solve the problem of diplomacy.I will emphasis the effectiveness of using SNS.

 All of us, Korean, may have an desire to widely introduce Korea and our culture to abroad. To achieve your desire, using SNS will be helpful.