2014년 9월 10일 수요일

Classical Argument Outline (Week 3)

 Classical argument outline

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Social network service, so-called SNS

is an effective tool for diplomacy of Korea.





1. The introduction, which warms up the audience, establishes goodwill and rapport with the readers, and announces the general theme or thesis of the argument.
I will start by throwing some questions that can grab people's attention. With these questions, I will point out that many people don't know well about diplomacy and that SNS can solve the problem of ignorance. I will end with my thesis, "Social Network Service is an effective tool for diplomacy of Korea."


2. The narration, which summarizes relevant background material, provides any information the audience needs to know about the environment and circumstances that produce the argument, and set up the stakes-what’s at risk in this question. In academic writing, this often takes the form of a literature review.
For my persuasive essay, I need some basic background information. I can divide them into two category. First one is 'diplomacy of Korea' and the other is 'SNS'First I will explain what diplomacy is, what kind of diplomacy exists and the problem of diplomacy in Korea. Second, I will explain what SNS is, and its various function.

3. The confirmation,which lays out in a logical order (usually strongest to weakest or most obvious to most subtle) the claims that support the thesis, providing evidence for each claim.
SNS has high accessibility, various information and is global and universal web-service. And these strong points make SNS as an effective tool for diplomacy.Then how does it help diplomacy?  
1. People can easily access to SNS, so everyone can know what diplomats and diplomatic organization are doing.  
 2. SNS can provide various information related to diplomacy  to those who are interested in it.
 3. In the case of foreigner, they can learn Korean culture easily through SNS.      /We can easily introduce our culture to foreigners.

4. The refutation and concession, which looks at opposing viewpoints to the writer’s claims, anticipating objections from the audience, and allowing as much of the opposing viewpoints as possible without weakening the thesis.
Some people are worrying because they think that SNS provide some inaccurate SNS and can give negative image of Korea to foreigners.However, it is easy to solve. I will explain how to solve this worrying with some practical examples. 

5. The summation, which provides a strong conclusion, amplifying the force of the argument,  and showing the readers that this solution is the best at meeting the circumstances.
It is not a good choice to get rid of SNS from diplomacy. Potentiality of diplomacy when using SNS, is large. If people effectively reflect strong points of SNS and solve the wrong point of SNS, we can enhance our national image and solve the problem of diplomacy.I will emphasis the effectiveness of using SNS.


댓글 2개:

  1. You need to provide English answers to receive credit

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  2. Yes, I know. I just write it down for my outline. This week I will write them in English~

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